Asttle Writing

Hello readers, today I am going to be talking about our classes Asttle Writing! We did the assessment because we have to do it twice a year. We write this about people playing in a water playground. Here is my writing and the photo about what we had to write about.

I could see people playing in the freezing water.
Also I could see people waiting under the decently sized bucket, f
or the freezing water to drop on them. People were playing on the fun looking playground.
I could see people chilling under the nice shade.

I could hear people talking to each other.
There were also lots of people laughing and having lots of fun at the playground.
Also there were kids yelling when they go down the little slide. I
could also hear the water coming from the fake trees splashing into the freezing water.

I could feel the hot sun blazing down on my chest.
Also, I could feel the freezing water splashing onto my legs.
There were lots of little kids splashing me with the freezing water.
I could feel some of the water crawling up to my tummy.

I could smell the disgusting coring coming from the freezing water.
There were all sorts of yummy food smells but I couldn't  see anybody eating.
I could smell the people running around me when the cold water is splashing onto me.
I could also smell some drinks like coke and sprite.

Thank you for looking at this blog post.
Sorry that I couldn't put a picture of the playground because it was glitching out.
Have a good day and I will see you on my next blog post bye!