Hello Readers, today I'm going to be showing you my descriptive writing for week 2. We were talking about an valley. We had to put as much description we could in the descriptive writing. Here is my one.
I could see a beautiful mountain. It had pretty bushes and lots of big trees.
You could see an enormous mountain that had a little bit of snow on it.
There was a big river and lots of wonderful flowers.
You could see an enormous mountain that had a little bit of snow on it.
There was a big river and lots of wonderful flowers.
I could smell the trees and bushes.
They didn’t smell that good though because they smelt like weird petrol. There were trees
that had a slight purple on the trees.
They didn’t smell that good though because they smelt like weird petrol. There were trees
that had a slight purple on the trees.
I could feel the freezing cold grass beneath my feet. It felt like ice beneath my feet
because it was so cool. Luckily there was no prickles under my feet.
because it was so cool. Luckily there was no prickles under my feet.
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