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Today i'm going to be showing you my Narrative writing 2. I did a little bit at home, I think i'm done but not 100% sure. We had to write about an abandoned house. I hope you enjoy my writing.
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BANG BANG, thunderstruck onto the house. The waves were about to hit the house. Jim didn’t know what to do, he went upstairs. The thunder hit and the waves flooded his house Jim got caught. He floated into the middle of the sea. He is drowning and he felt someone pull him up.
The people gave him CPR, “Are you alright” Said the stranger. “Yeah i’m fine” Said Jim. They sailed to a little island there was alot of water there. They saw fish everywhere but no birds and other animals. There were trees tho, they went to go look at the caves finally they found some wild animals they were animals that were meant to eat us buy now but they think that we would eat them. I tried to pat one but they were scared anfd moved back. I hopped into the cave I went to go get some materials to cover us.
When we finished we saw a storm heading in. We hopped into the cave all the animals was starting to trust us. I heard thunder and things breaking in the backround. I went outside I lost the person that saved my life I still don’t know his name tho. I so him laying on the ground. “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO” Said jim. I saw blood poring down on him. The lion went to him and gave him a burger. At this time Jim was only 12 years old. Me and the other animals went and built a SOS ( Save our souls). There were million of people flying ove us the tigers we growing up with Jim.
Finally a plane saw us they landed near us. “Why are you here kid”?. I stayed quiet few seconds later “ I got washed away” Said Jim “ Hop in said the plane piloet” Said the pilot. We hopped and the tiger followed me. “ He is friendly” Said Jim. They flew Jim to his normal house and dropped the tiger of with him. The tiger was like a pet to jim. Jim’s mum cuddle him so tight.
I hope you enjoy my writing please leave a comment if you have time. Have a good day bye!
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