Narrative Writing Story 1

Hello Boys and Girls

Today i am going to be showing you my narrative story. We had to describe a boat getting strikes buy thunder. My story is about a guy getting washed to shore, and trying to get help but there are a lot of wild animals. I hope you enjoy this blog post and my writing.

This is what we had to write about.

 

Here is my writing

The waves splashed around in the sea. Nobody knew because they were watching youtube and playing fortnite on a ship. The storm broke the ship . Only 3 survivors they  got washed to shore. They were at a wild forest. There were birds and lions in the distance.

They realised they could not waste anytime. So they built shelter as fast as a cheater. 2 of them got the materials and 1 of them built the house. A few hours later they finished there house, then they went to make a bed. All they did was get leaves and more wood. It an easy job for them. Before they went to bed they built  a SOS. After they did the SOS they went to bed.

In the middle of the night there house broke down. All of them were hungry luckily there was fruit everywhere they went. They went to go build there “JACKO GO GET WOOD FOR OUR HOUSE AND Johny go make breakfast” said Lennox. Jacko rushed to get some wood and daisy just walked along picking fruit for breakfast. They didn’t realise that it was in the middle of the night because the sun was bright. The lions were friendly there were protecting our house. There house were finished and breakfast was ready. When they were finished It was 8AM.

After breakfast they went to go give the lions some food because the lions protect us from other wild animals. There is a female and a male, the female is going to have a baby soon we all think. The male was scared that we would heart the female. We put the food down and the sniffed it a couple of times then they ate it.

There was a plane that landed on the middle of the beach. They wanted to try and kill us, because they thought that we would hurt the animals. “We are innocents” said the captain. “No you are trying to kill the animals” Said the police that was in the plane. We ran and ran finally we lost them, the lion went to the police man and growled at him. For some reason they went  for a swim.

We showed ourselves they didn’t really care. There was a tornado coming in. “POLICE TORANDO BEHIND YOU” Said Johny. We asked if we could hop in the plane. “Jump in the lions and some of the nice animals hopped in just in time. The plane was very very big. They flied us back home where it was safe.

I hope you Boys and Girls enjoyed this blog post about my writing. Have a good day bye!