Hello everyone, today I am going to be showing you my writing. We had to write about an invention that is either real or fake. This took me a couple of days to do. We had to start of by doing a draft in our book. After that we published it into a google doc. This was a pretty fun piece of writing to do. Here is my writing.
“Boom” The explosion sounded as Michael was building his new invention named “Hellerbike”. It is combined with 3 vehicles: a helicopter, car and motorbike.
Finally Michael has finished the motorbike wheels for his Hellerbike! He made the outside out of Iron and the inside out of steel.
“SSSSS” As the sound of the laser cutter sliced through the solid metal…..
“AHHH” He screamed, the laser cut through his stomach.
“BANG” He fell to the ground and his eyes slowly shut.
4 Hours Later
Michael slowly opened his eyes. After a couple of seconds he finally realized where he was… In the hospital!?!?
“Hey! You're finally awake, how are you feeling?” The nurse asked.
“Im fine, thanks,” Michael replied.
The nurse started to see what was wrong with him.
“OH MY!” she shouted.
She was speechless, she couldn’t believe what she was seeing.
She started to call for backup. Doctors started to rush into the room with all these different types of medical tools.
2 Hours Later
They have just finished healing him. At the moment he is asleep because they gave him a pill to make him fall asleep.
The Next Day
He finally woke up from the pill. He realized no nurses were around. Then he knew it was his time to sneak out.
He slowly crept out of bed and snuck out the window. Luckily for him, the nurses didn’t realize he sneaked out.
30 Minutes Of Walking Later
Slowly he opened the garage door. Then he realised… His invention was gone. He couldn’t believe his eyes. Even worse, he had forgotten how to make it.
But he didn’t give up. He just sat down and did whatever that he could remember, after a little bit of thinking he remembered how to make the wheels.
He went to the shop and got safety gear because he didn’t want to get hurt by the laser again.
After he finished getting the safety gear he hopped in his car and headed back home.
(He got changed into his safety gear)
Once he got home. He walked to the garage and started working on the invention.
1 Hour Later
He just finished making the motorbike wheels. He was surprised but proud of himself because that was the fastest he ever made them.
The next day…
After lots of hard work overnight he finally finished his Hellerbike. He was ready to take it out for a spin.
“WOOHOO!!” He yelled. Michael was having the time of his life.
He was flying all over the south island. Slowly Michael went back home really proud of what he
created/invented.
1 Year Later
Michaels invention is the biggest thing in the whole of NZ. He has over 100 posters and a factory. He is even a millionaire!
Thank you for reading my writing. Have a good day or night goodbye!
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