Hello people, I am back from the school holidays. I will be showing you's my 1st story of description writing. We did this for writing as you's may know. You don't write a story you just describe what's happening and you add descriptive language. Here is my story and the photo we had to describe.
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 16 October 2020
Description Writing Story 1
I hope you enjoyed my blog post. Feel free to comment and I will see you on my next blog post goodbye!
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful- how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Lennox I really like you blog post I think it's amazing. Have you been on a tropical island?
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