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Thursday, 28 May 2020

My Narrative Writing (Please Give Feedback)

Hello people, today I am going to be showing you my Narrative Writing. I would like feedback so I can see what I did wrong or right. We had to describe a picture of this person in a car taking a photo. Here is my narrative writing and the picture we had to describe.



I hope you enjoyed this blog post. Feel free to give me feedback. Have a good day and I will see you probably tomorrow or my next blog post. BYE!

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