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Friday, 29 May 2020

Pick A Path


Hello people, today I am going to be talking about my Fortnite pick a path story. I haven't finished just yet so could you please give me and my friend some feedback. We did this for cyber smart. Here is the slide show me and my friend made.


Thank you for looking at my blog post. Please give me and Kody some feedback. Have a good day or night and see you on my next blog post bye.

Thursday, 28 May 2020

100 Word Count Story

Hello people, today I am going to be showing you my 100 word count story. We had to do a picture about a little winy lake. Here is my story I did for my 100 word count story.  

One time I was going to see a little lake near me. I liked looking at lakes but this one was a little dirty. I tried to clean the lake but I felt something snap into my leg. It was painful, I tried to shake it off but it wasn’t budging. I kept on shaking and shaking but nothing was happening. I thought it started to go into pieces. I saw my dad start to drive to me in a couple of minutes. He was like “what has happened to your leg” I said “ I don’t know but nothing is on it” He started to pull me and eventually it let go. Since that day I never went to clean that lake again and I went to the doctors.

I hope you enjoyed this blog post. I will be trying to catch up on all of your comments so feel free to comment. Have a good day and I will see you on my next blog post.

My Narrative Writing (Please Give Feedback)

Hello people, today I am going to be showing you my Narrative Writing. I would like feedback so I can see what I did wrong or right. We had to describe a picture of this person in a car taking a photo. Here is my narrative writing and the picture we had to describe.



I hope you enjoyed this blog post. Feel free to give me feedback. Have a good day and I will see you probably tomorrow or my next blog post. BYE!