Hello people, today I am going to be talking about my 100 word count I have done.We have to do stories that have 100 words in it. We have to put whatever Miss Scott told us to put into. Here is my 100 word count story.
One day there was this scary potato that had superpowers. I went to this high place.
I saw the scary potato, I think it is trying to use its superpowers.
I was trying to hang onto the bars. Then I saw this person under me.
He said “I'm trying to hold on” He shouted. I got scared and I screamed
“ Potato stop!” Then some of the potatoes said “ Why should I?” the potato said.
I was thinking to myself is this gonna be my last day alive.
Then I saw the good potato sweeping in to take out the bad potato.
He beat the bad potato and carried me and the other person down. The end.
I saw the scary potato, I think it is trying to use its superpowers.
I was trying to hang onto the bars. Then I saw this person under me.
He said “I'm trying to hold on” He shouted. I got scared and I screamed
“ Potato stop!” Then some of the potatoes said “ Why should I?” the potato said.
I was thinking to myself is this gonna be my last day alive.
Then I saw the good potato sweeping in to take out the bad potato.
He beat the bad potato and carried me and the other person down. The end.
I hope you enjoyed this blog. I will see you on my next blog post bye!
Hi Lennox
ReplyDeleteI like how interesting you 100 word count is in your blog post. Maybe you could work On adding more detail to your introduction. But so far its good.