Volcano Story (Descriptive Writing, Narrative)

Hey readers, today I am going to be showing you my writing for my volcano story. We were doing a narrative, we had to show not tell. Here is my writing.

There were once 4 people on a boat. There names were Jimmy, Pizza, Lazar and Mayo!
They always went to this island and always go say hi to the animals there were a Fox, Dogs,
Wolf and Monkey. Jimmy was sweating really bad and he wiped some of his sweat on his blue jeans
and his puma T shirt. Pizza and Lazar were getting wet pizza was getting wet in a pizza suit. Lazar was
getting wet in lazarbeam merch and Adidas shorts. Mayo was smacking his white top and white pants
because he was bored.

They sailed to the mini forest. There were beautiful green trees and green grass. There were lots of
scared animals. The 4 people saw the volcano about to erupt in another 4-5 hours about. They wished
that other people knew about this island and the volcano. 

They brought a really big buckets and tried to water the lava in the volcano. I
t wasn’t working one bit so they realised that they had to ring up the cops about the volcano
about to erupt.

The cops came with big big buckets and a helicopter. They threw the water into the volcano it was
helping just a little. Then more cops started to come. Then some firefighters came with helicopters and
buckets and started helping to.

Each time the people threw water into the volcano the animals came out one by one.
Then suddenly lots of smoke started to come out the cops and firefighters started to call more people t
o come and help.

Then the volcano had a little bit of lava coming out of it. They started to get more people coming.
Then the volcano went down and there was no smoke coming out of it.

I hope you enjoyed this blog post. Feel free to comment and have a good day or night bye!

The animals came out of there hiding spot and started running around the place. Then the 4 boys
got a gold medal from kinda saving the day by ringing up the police and firefighters. The animals
started running up to the 4 boys and cuddling them and the volcano never erupted again!

Asttle Writing

Hello readers, today I am going to be talking about our classes Asttle Writing! We did the assessment because we have to do it twice a year. We write this about people playing in a water playground. Here is my writing and the photo about what we had to write about.

I could see people playing in the freezing water.
Also I could see people waiting under the decently sized bucket, f
or the freezing water to drop on them. People were playing on the fun looking playground.
I could see people chilling under the nice shade.

I could hear people talking to each other.
There were also lots of people laughing and having lots of fun at the playground.
Also there were kids yelling when they go down the little slide. I
could also hear the water coming from the fake trees splashing into the freezing water.

I could feel the hot sun blazing down on my chest.
Also, I could feel the freezing water splashing onto my legs.
There were lots of little kids splashing me with the freezing water.
I could feel some of the water crawling up to my tummy.

I could smell the disgusting coring coming from the freezing water.
There were all sorts of yummy food smells but I couldn't  see anybody eating.
I could smell the people running around me when the cold water is splashing onto me.
I could also smell some drinks like coke and sprite.

Thank you for looking at this blog post.
Sorry that I couldn't put a picture of the playground because it was glitching out.
Have a good day and I will see you on my next blog post bye!