Hi guys today i'm going to be talking about Armistice day. We have also be writing information about Armistice dayz. Here is the w.a.l.t
This is the paragraph I read about Armistice day.
"At 11am on 11 November this year, Aotearoa New Zealand marked the centenary of the armistice that ended the First World War in 1918. On that day 100 years ago, after four years of brutal conflict, war finally gave way to peace." - From https://ww100.govt.nz/armistice
This is how I re-wrote my paragraph in my own words.
On the 11 of November 11am it was the first world war. It started at the 1914 it took 4 years until it finished.
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