Hi guys today i'm going to be talking about spy fox. It is about my writing, I have not finished my writing I just want feedback so you can help me make my writing better. Please leave me feedback in the comment section below. And I also want feedback about how good i'm doing on my goal. Hope you enjoy.
Use talking in my writing Use strong describing words Use perfect Punctuation
There was a family of penguins living on a small Iceberg.
There was a dad, baby and a mum penguin.
“It is time to dive: Said mama penguin
“ I don’t wanna go mum” Said baby penguin
Then the baby penguin went down and suddenly a laser striked out of nowhere.
Spy fox was and lilly the cat was living in a fancy home.
They were going to have a date. “Finally we have time to our self” Said lilly.
Lilly was about to give Spy fox his drink but then Spy foxes watch turned green.
He had a mission that he needed to do fast.
“Sorry I think I have to aboard the date“Said Spy Fox
“But you promised that we would have a drink” Said lilly
Then Spy Fox went into his flying car.He went to America because that was
where Dr hanmer was. Then he parked in the bushes.
He was camping there for a bit so he can see where he could go.
Then he grappled on top of the roof. He took out the guard and climbed
thru a vent.
Then he saw Doctor Hamner he was trying to explode the world
“SPY FOX!” Said lilly
“Lilly!” Said spy fox
“You will pay Doctor hanmer.
Then Spy fox took out one fish. He was about to shoot the button to make
the machine stop so lilly won’t dye. Then he got covered with fish, he
dropped his gun. He got it again he quickly standed up and shot the yellow
button at the last second. Lilly fell down and Spy fox cached her.
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